Friday, November 2, 2012

Reality sucks.


My research argument paper did not reflect my true potential. I could have worked harder and made stronger arguments to fully analyze my topic. The topic that I chose was a very controversial one and it was much harder to analyze then I originally thought it would be. Although this rough draft wasn’t my best work, I did make some strong points. I believe that I fully explained the argument that I was making about abortion and provided research that was related to my argument. I think that if you read my paper, you would understand what argument I was trying to make. My argument was definitely lacking some research that could have helped make it stronger. I needed to incorporate more sources into my paper, but since I have been having a hard time I didn’t do that. I believe that I analyzed the visual thoroughly and explained why this visual fit with my argument. I believe that the visual that I chose for my research argument paper was perfect for my argument and really helped me argue it. Although there are many visuals that pertain to abortion, I think that I chose the right one for the argument in my paper. I could have relied more on research and used that for more of my argument. I think that I just relied on my knowledge of the subject and did a lot of the arguing. I think that if I put in more research and sources, my argument would have been stronger. Before I turn in my final draft for this paper, I will make sure that I do this right and my sources are perfect for my argument. I regret not trying my hardest and I wish I could say why I have been struggling, but I promise that before this semester is over, I will prove to you that I am worthy of Clemson University. I am sorry for being such a mess and when we meet on Monday during your office hours, I can explain what I am going through. I really hope that you will understand. 

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