Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Ways to Clean Up My Paper


Overall, I am satisfied with my research paper on the Stop Online Piracy Act. In my paper, I argue that SOPA is an ineffective way to combat online piracy. The main argument that I made, was that SOPA has a high potential for abuse in that material is unnecessarily censored and that the functionality of the internet would be harmed. The strongest point in my paper was that SOPA harms the functionality of the internet. In this section of my paper, I explain how SOPA could disrupt the online economy. I present my own opinions on the matter and use evidence that shows how SOPA would cause more harm than good.
While this section of my paper was very balanced with discussion and evidence other parts of my paper had too much evidence or not enough. When discussing how SOPA censors content, I relied heavily upon evidence that shows how SOPA censors information. While I discuss this issue, I do not go as in depth as I probably should have. This resulted in there being too much information and not enough discussion. On the other hand in some parts of my paper I began arguments but never provided enough evidence baking up my claims. When discussing the copyright industry I make assumptions about their positions on SOPA without offering enough supporting evidence.
Instead of simply restating another sources argument, I felt that I did an adequate job analyzing sources and presenting my own arguments. While I did need to use sources to give my arguments validity, I relied mostly on my own ideas. In some parts of my essay this is very evident, but in other parts I believe it is less notable. This is because in order to discuss SOPA, I had to explain the different aspects of the bill first. As a result some parts of the paper contain too much information. To fix this, I believe I need to work on integrating information into my paper better so that it is more dispersed. This will help make my own ideas stand out, which will make my paper appear more argumentative. 

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Paper Reflection

For this week's blog post, in 300-400 words, reflect on your research argument paper. Explain what your strong points were and what you could have done better or where your argument was lacking. Were you confident in your analysis or did you rely heavily on other sources to make the argument for you?

Friday, October 26, 2012

The Story of Dr. Love

It was a dark and stormy evening when a group of friends went to a SI session to study for a chemistry exam they would have next week. The melancholy state of the weather made the students want to take a break from their studying and lighten up the mood by talking about the various myths and superstition around campus. Their SI leader, Brian, asked the group if they have ever heard the story of Dr. Love and since the group of friends was merely freshmen they obviously have not. Brian told them that Dr. Love was a former professor at the college they attend that died long ago that used to rape and kill the female students in his class but never got caught until one faithful night. There was this one student named Ashley Patterson that had a secret crush on him and came to flirt with him during his office hours, which were conveniently late in the evening and nobody actually came. As things got intense, Dr. Love went to get a long dress in his office that he wanted her to put on which made Ashley feel uneasy when he said it belonged to his wife. As she put it on her feelings for Dr. Love started to fade and she wanted to go home then he attacked her. He put his hands were around her throat as he slammed her on his desk and started to take his pants off. Ashley, who’s breathing was getting slower by the second, grabbed a pen that was next to her and stabbed him in his jugular vein and was able to escape as he bleed to death. Brian told the students in his SI session that his grave is in the cemetery a mile off campus and that if a female were to go to his grave in a white dress Dr. Love’s spirit would come and kill you. Kim, one of the students in the group, didn’t believe this was true and the other students in the group decided to make a bet with her to see if she would actually go to his grave. After they left the SI session Kim put on a white dress and drove to the cemetery alone because her other friends on the group were too scared to go. Once she got to the grave she took a picture of the grave to prove she was there. When she turned around to go back to her car she felt something pull her dress. Kim turned to see what it was but saw nothing and the force of the pull was getting stronger as if she was getting pulled in the grave. Kim’s heart was beating rapidly as she struggled for her life to get away but she continued to go down until she collapsed in utter terror. Kim was never seen again.

The Experiment


            An alarm sounded somewhere outside of my dream-filled state. I casually tossed my hand toward the noise only to find myself hitting cement. I awoke with a panic and quickly looked around. I was in a decent-sized room with four other people, two male and two female. They were each waking up with a reaction similar to my own. A loudspeaker clicked on and a voice boomed out, “Welcome. I hope you had a nice rest. You are now a participant in an experiment. Your goal is to survive. The task is to follow the rules in each of the upcoming trials. Good luck!” An audible click could be heard from the door at the end of the room. Everyone turned toward it. One of the girls in the group began to cry hysterically. Another girl stepped up to console her and when composure was gained I asked, “What’s the last thing everyone remembers?” A big burly guy stepped up, “The last thing I remember is going to sleep.” Nods could be seen around the room. The loudspeaker crackled again and everyone turned toward the noise. The same voice said, “Please walk through the door. The experiment is ready.”
The same girl began to cry again. This time she was hysterical to the point of being inconsolable. A male went to console her this time but to no avail. Everyone began walking toward the door. I made it first so I opened it, peered inside, gave everyone the “all clear” head nod, and walked through. The girl was sitting at this point and clearly refused to move. Everyone left in the room tried to get her to walk through the door. One of the males even threatened to carry her through. After about two minutes of this, the smaller of the two males chose to stay behind with her. Those choosing to walk through the door did so.
“We have to close the door.” I said, “The next trial won’t begin until it shuts.” The scrawny guy nodded and focused attention back on the girl. The last person through shut the door. A loud buzzer went off, the door expelled an audible click, and two screams could be heard ringing out.
“First one across wins their life.” The loudspeaker boomed as the lights came on to full strength. In front of the three of us was an obstacle course straight out of a movie. There were pendulum saws, spikes coming up from the ground, and a rather weak looking stop on the ground. After a brief moment of silence over what had just occurred, the decision was made as to the order. The burly guy would be first, the girl would go second, and I would be last. The burly guy ran. He was rather slow and didn’t make it through the spikes. The girl gave a curt nod, had a look of fierce determination and ran faster. She made it through the spikes only to pause in an area of the course she felt was out of pendulum reach.
I reached into my pocket and pulled out a small remote. Upon hitting the third button, the course stopped moving. If someone living had been around, they would have heard me say, “It’s sad when the experimenter is the only one to survive.” I walked to the end of the course and out the door into daylight in search of my new targets for participants.

Tunnels


Once you’ve been at Clemson for a couple months, you’re bound to hear about the tunnels – the various underground tunnels scattered around campus.  Some entrances are in mechanical buildings, one is by Tillman Hall, and a few are located behind the library below the huge metal grates on the ground that occasionally releases steam.  Rumor has it that if you are caught down there you will be arrested and/or expelled.  But why are they so strict? Long ago, before Clemson University was even built on this land, there was a man named Jasper.  Jasper was born with a deformity of his face that made people run and scream at the sight of him.  The unfortunate effect of his mutation pushed Jasper off the edge into insanity and turned him into a cold –hearted killer, not unlike the cold hearts of those who laid their eyes upon his face in terror. 
So Jasper would sneak into his victims’ house at night and would first eliminate their eyelids so they were forced to stare at his disfigured form.  Then he would kill them.  The story is that Jasper hid all the bodies of the helpless, wide-eyed victims in huge pits that he dug underground…the same location as the tunnels under Clemson.  The bodies were eventually found after Jasper had mysteriously disappeared from town, with all of their eyes staring up into nothingness. 
Not long after Clemson University was built on top of these burial grounds, a naïve freshman named Pete decided to be adventurous one night with his friends.  They had found the openings to the morbid pits before they were off limits and Pete was double-dog-dared to venture in.  They found him the next day, sprawled in the tunnel in the fashion that accompanies the dead, with no eye-lids and his huge, doe eyes staring into nothingness.  After that incident the university forbade entrance into any of the tunnels and put iron grates over them so that no student would again meet the fate that young Pete did.
So who knows what happened to Pete that night? Is Jasper’s ghost still alive and claiming victims? Or is it the souls of the victims of Jasper’s slaying, making others pay for their gruesome death? I guess we shall SEE.  

The Ghostly Shadow


     Jamison woke up to a horrible crash. Startled and frightened, he quickly threw the covers of his bed over his head. The world seemed to slow down as his mind, like that of a frightened animal, pumped irrational fears into every nook and cranny of his consciousness. He slowly opened a gap in the sheets to quietly take in air and search for the cause of the loud sound. As he searched the room he noticed that nothing was out of place and nobody else had awakened. He then began to remove the covers from his head. Not soon after he had the whole comforter off and decided to further investigate what could have possibly happened. As he slipped his cold feet into his warm night slippers he noticed a very tiny sound that seemingly emanated from the kitchen. He quickly nervously pondered to himself whether he should check it out or play it safe and hope this was a dream. Deciding that it was best to discover the cause of all the eerie noises and the loud ruckus he pulled out his Grandfather’s old WWII sword from the closet and headed toward the kitchen. Closer and closer he crept, with the sound getting louder and switching from a quiet noise to that of metal scraping metal. Then when he was almost there the music of Tiny Tim played and he fell to the ground. Scared to death he waited for what seemed like hours before finally gathering his whits and getting up to finally confront the menace. With the music still playing, he unsheathed the shiny steel sword and ran into the kitchen screaming with all his might to see what was making the noise and........... nothing. Nothing was there. He started gasping for air and sweating profusely as he nervously turned every which way to find what had created the noise and where the music was coming from. With a loud crash of pot something jumped and he swung hard and furiously trying to hit the creature or person that was torturing him so. Still swinging, he finally saw the monster and as it reached out to grab him..... he awoke from his nightmare. After noticing it was over he heaved a sigh of relief. As he wiped the sweat from his forehead, he decided that he was NEVER going to party again. After everything was calm and he took a sip of water from the bathroom next to his room, he lied back down in bed and swore that must have been real. And as he closed his eyes and drifted off to sleep, a long black shadow drifted every so slowly towards him. 

Thursday, October 25, 2012

Abbey Miller


Often on our darkest days it feels as though some people have it all. And although the nagging voice in the back of your mind begs you to keep in mind that there is more than meets the eye, things are easier said than done. For Abbey Miller, this was no exception. In high school she found her place in the background, silently setting the stage so that others could thrive, could compare themselves to her and feel that sense of superiority that everyone longs for. In a word, she was forgettable.
Her high school days passed as quickly as any person unfortunate enough to be caught alone with her and they lacked any semblance of substance that could validate them as worthy memories.
            After graduation, things to a turn for the disastrous. Abbey was abducted from her childhood home and after a televised, weeklong search she was discovered delirious and badly beaten in an alleyway a block from the local high school. Weeks later, information surfaced that suggested that the identity of Abbey’s abductor was, in fact, Abbey herself, fueled by a desire to be seen that had all but consumed her. In the weeks that followed, Abbey made claims that she had truly been kidnapped but it only solidified the public opinion that she was only after the attention she had so obviously been deprived of.
             But after a while, as the novelty of the news wore off, Abbey disappeared along with the story.  And as the town was finally returning to their old ways she disappeared again, returning in the same disheveled way as before, but this time in a condition that was impossible to ignore. At nine months and counting Abbey appeared to be pregnant in a way that clearly caused her excruciating pain. This time, the town had no choice but to believe her claims. Fueled by a hate fire like no other, she bore an infant from hell. Before the story had even fully broken, the thirty pounds of animated torture began its tour of destruction, putting an end to the place that had spurned her, making her personal hell a reality.

The dangers of the Road


As I looked straight ahead, the yellow line to my left seemed boundless. All I could see is the black pavement never ending with the yellow line winding left and right through the country. It was late; too late for me to be driving. All that’s on my mind is the question “Why?”. Why would I drive all the way back in this darkness consumed stretch of limitless pavement with my head lights being the only light for miles? Not only was it absurd but also naïve. But all college students are naïve, right? So it’s acceptable? I’ve heard stories about this road but there’s no way they could be true. “Once you begin to hear a loud piercing sound, cover your ears, you don’t want to know what happens next.” Who would actually believe that stuff? It’s stupid. I’m 18. I’m an adult now. I can make my own decisions. It’s my life. Who are they to tell me what to do? I felt my hands begin to sweat and my temples were throbbing. I needed to cool down. As I kept on the road, winding left and right, the path seemed to grow progressively darker. The pines seemed to grow taller and the road began to seem narrower. The yellow line began to grow fuzzy and everything seemed to run together. I felt a rumbling and a piercing sound and everything became clear again. My tire was riding on the side of the road. I rubbed my eyes to make sure I was still viewing everything clear.  All of a sudden I felt my tire start to rumble and my car began to bog down. A flat tire? Perfect. Right out in the middle of nowhere. I pulled my car to the side of the road on the narrow grassland, knowing there was no point since nobody would be traveling down this road this late anyways. My only choice was to change it myself, but what about the stories? Would I hear the sound? What would I do if I did? After a short debate, I decided the only way to get out of this wretched place was to change my tire. I slowly opened the door and began to get out. I traveled to my trunk and opened it to receive the spare tire. As I rolled it out, I began to hear a faint noise. I shrugged it off. I rolled the tire over to my flat and brought the jack. I began to jack up my car as the noise became progressively louder. I still purposely ignored it. It’s all just in my head. I finally got the right side of the car jacked up and began to loosen up the lug nuts. By this time the sound was becoming unbearable. The shrill pain of the sound was jaw-clenching. I felt a sudden jump and found myself in the cabin of my car staring into a pair of headlights right in front of me in the left lane with a consistent shriek of honking. I hadn’t had a flat tire at all, I had fallen asleep. I gazed, astonished as the pair of headlights merged with mine and was then on a personal basis with death.

Freshman Frenzy

Every freshman is eager to get into their dorm rooms and get settled in.  Chase was just like every eager freshman.  He was anxious to begin new relationships and meet plenty of girls.  Meeting girls was one of the reasons Chase came to Clemson.  He had the grades to go anywhere, he just wanted something more out of a college.  That something more came in the form of a girl named Morgan.  Morgan was very smart and she was a Pre-Med major.  Chase was an engineer major so they shared chemistry and calculus.  Study seesions became hanging out and hanging out lead to dates.  Eventually, Chase and Morgan became boyfriend and girlfriend.  The two were loving college and participating it everything it had to offer.  The first semester was going great and Chase had all A's.  He and Morgan were doing great and he was involved with the club golf team.  Everything was great until the disappearance of one of the people on his hall.  Everyone on campus was freaking out and the police came to invistigate the disapperance only to find no evidence.  The same thing had happened the last three years at Clemson.  All of the disappearances had a pattern.  One person would disappear and then several items would be stolen and replaced with notes.  The notes told everyone what would disappear next.  The thing to disappear next was one guy and one girl.  The authorities made an announcement saying to keep your doors locked at all times and dont go out at night by yourself.  Several weeks passed and campus life began to go back to normal.  People began to forget about what the authorities said and went back to what they normally do.  Thursday nights meant early to bed for Chase.  On Fridays he had an 8 am and then he would go play golf with a couple of his buddies.  He layed his clubs and clothes out for the next day.  His roomate was out studying late that night so Chase left the door unlocked expecting him to come in later.  The next morning Chase woke up with his golf clubs missing and a note that read "always lock your door because you never know if your room mate is coming back or not."  The kidnapper had taken Chase's roommate in the middle of the night and had also snuck into his room to steal his golf clubs and leave the note.  Chase was terrified but grateful for his life.  Everyone at Clemson knew the pattern and every girl feared for her life.  Each girl waited anxiously until the kidnapper made the next move.

No Where


It was a bright and sunny day
Then things took a turn in a very wrong way
And just when I decided to run
That’s when the trouble begun

Behind me I heard the footsteps patter
And I began to wonder what was the matter
And all of the things that go bump in the night
Started to fill my head with fright

All of these creatures chasing me down
Afraid I would not make it back to town
All of the sudden there were sounds
I knew not where I was bound

Monsters behind me moaning and growling
Werewolves, that I could hear howling
Ghouls and goblins shouting and creepy
On the wall the blood was seeping

The sight of blood gushing
Made me go rushing
Out to the far west side
I thought that’s where I could hide

At once I got there
I thought that these odds were not fair
Surrounded by blood curling screams
That were bursting at the seems

The sight of the corpses lining the path
Was evidence of the monster’s wrath
My heart was pounding, my palms were sweating
I had no idea where I was heading

All I knew with no doubt
Was that I needed a way out
For soon they would find me and it would be the end
But I saw a light around the bend

As I got closer the light turned to dark
I was just as alone as the start
There was absolutely no light
And then something grabbed me and I started to fight

I punched his face
He needed to mind my personal space
And just as I thought I was getting away
The monster told me he had something to say

These monsters were chasing me through the streets
Because I stole all of their treats

Camp Happy Fun Time!


John Smith was a camp counselor at camp Happy Fun Time!  The kids in his cabin were hyperactive bunch.  They all enjoyed playing games outside and getting into playful mischief.  The summer was winding down and John was particularly excited to get home to see his friends and family and finally start spending his well-earned money. 
As part of the celebration of the end of the season management had arranged for a carnival to be set up in the large field outside the cafeteria two days before the kids had to go home.  All the children were eager to play the carnival games and ride the rides.  John knew he was probably too old to be interested in those things but he was excited too.  He had not gotten to do anything really fun and spontaneous in months and he was eager to allow the kids to run wild and finally cut loose. 
On the day of the carnival the children were kept busy in the morning by various classes or activities under the supervision of management while the counselors helped the carnies set up the stands and various other attractions.  When everything was set up all the counselors made sure to get out of the way as the kids ran towards the carnival.  They enjoyed the house of mirrors, the ferris wheel, the swing chairs, mini golf and various inflatable bounce houses.  There were clowns, fortune tellers, and even men on stilts.  It was the perfect final bash of the summer.
The next day, after the carnival had been set up the counselors told the kids to start getting their things together after their activities because they would be leaving on the next day.  John was enjoying his lunch at the counselors table with his co-counselor Chuck when there was a large ruckus.  Children were by the windows shouting and pointing.  Chuck went over to see what all the noise was about.  When he returned he told John that one of the clowns must have stayed behind.   John moved to look out the window and sure enough, there was a clown standing still in the empty field looking at them.  John told the kids to go finish their lunch and started to go outside to see what was going on with the clown.  The clown was only out of his sight for about a minute but by the time John got outside the clown was nowhere to be found.  John decided to go and tell management since they were in charge of the carnival.
            Management called the carnival service and demanded to know if a clown had stayed behind for some reason.  The carnival service replied that they don’t have clowns because they are a little too creepy for the kids.  Management told all the counselors that if they saw the clown again they should call security and not interact with him.  Luckily the clown was not seen again that day and security was not called.  Everyone just figured it was some sort of end of the season prank.
            The next morning John woke up and looked around.  There were no children in his cabin.  He jumped up with a start and called out for them but heard nothing.  He ran to Chuck’s cabin but it was empty of children as well.  The camp called the police and arranged for a manhunt.  The parents joined.  John returned to the cabin to look for any clues and only then did he realize that on every single bunk bed was a balloon animal dripping with blood. 

The Wood


In the heart of a powerful land lay a sleepy little town of no genuine importance,
which was unknown to any person of prominence.
The town was only one square lined with small shops and a few lanes,
and in this town children ran along streets and pressed noses against panes.
Attached to its skirt was countryside even quieter,
that babbled with brooks and with animal clatter.

The people of the town were entranced by the serenity.
They were always whispering their conversations and muffling their hilarity.
At the very stitch of the town was the beginning of an ominous grove,
here the people of the town never strode.
As much as the town was small and insignificant,
the wood on the edge of this town was vast and infamous.

The forest sprawled dark webs over most of the land,
casting long deep shadows that only decay could withstand.

Deep among the trees where the thicket grows thickest.
Contained in small knoll there was a figure most wicked.
In the knoll not a sound could be heard, the air was musty and sour,
and the cold overcame any warmth or power.
Not a thing could be seen because the trees were so compressed,
and the light could not break in so the darkness was immense.

It was in this forest where the tale begins,
a tale of desperate souls and of sins.

There once were three lone travelers that got lost in the night,
and came upon the knoll unaware of their blight.
The first was a tall man of very great stature.
The second was ill tempered and ruthless in nature.
The third was humble and went where they commanded,
he followed them loyally and never reprimanded.

The three travelers got lost in the forest’s webbed vines,
and soon had taken to their many wines.

Fast they went into uneasy sleep.
When around them rose a fog dreary and deep.
It surrounded the three travelers without sound or clue,
and the travelers awoke in the middle of the night covered in dew.

That is when the first traveler saw the hooded figure,
and cowered backwards with a tremor.

The figure that lived in the knoll was most feared.
His pattern of destruction was very unclear.
The people he left untouched in his wake,
counted themselves lucky at their narrow escape.
Wherever he went, people whispered their fate,
Because their fate was death and death was his name.

At first the strong traveler put up a fight.
He valiantly gambled away his only life.
The first traveler though proud and highly acclaimed,
had no humility and no reason for praise.
His heart did not prove good nor true,
and so he died a death in his due.
Like many before him strong and proud,
He fell from great heights to the hard ground.

The two travelers watched in horror as their companion fell,
And death turned the second traveler, who feared the depths of hell.
The second traveler was not brave like the first, but he sly.
He sought to outsmart death and planned not to die.
The second traveler knew of nothing but greed,
so he thought he understood death’s needs.
He asked death what he wanted in return for his soul,
and so he bargained his life with the foul ghoul.
Death was not thwarted and so was not deceived,
and he claimed the second traveler with just as much ease.
The last traveler watched as the man was stripped of his every thought, plan, and memory.
His mind was lost to the forest and the second traveler died of insanity.

Death turned to the third traveler, who saw no hope.
The strong and the clever died, and he was nothing like those.
The third traveler looked death in the eyes prepared for the worst,
and death reluctantly spoke these admonishing words.

“You who are humble,
Do not see with your own eyes.
That you who accepts me,
Forever deserve what is life.”

Then death vanished and the third traveler was left behind.
He did not fear death, because he thought death was kind.

The traveler grew old and came back to this knoll,
But never again did he see the hooded ghoul.
The traveler still walks in the wood very late,
But death never comes for him and he is doomed to sit there and wait.

Poor little Jonny


     Johnny was a boy around the age of eight.  He got good grades, was well behaved and he was a ladies man to all the eight year-old girls on the playground.  He lived with his parents in a rundown shack on a large property with many acres of woods.  Which this was good for Johnny, in a sense.  You Johnny was a latch key kid you know the kind that comes home from school and returns to an empty house because his parents were always working and didn’t have time for poor little Johnny.  But he didn’t seem to mind too much.  Well every day after school Johnny would be the good little boy he was and complete all his chores and homework.  After that Johnny did what he enjoyed more than anything in the world; exploring the woods.  Johnny knew the woods like the back of his hands.  He knew where the best trees to take a nap in, where all the trails led to, and where the best fishing spots were.
 Well one day after school Johnny completed everything asked of him.  So like every other day Johnny went exploring like always.  Johnny took a long walk on one of his favorite trails that would lead to a clearing shaded from the sun by the tree tops.  Johnny arrived at his favorite spot and decided to take a nap.  It was a good nap the kind that you wake up from feeling more rested from.  He may have slept for hours that day but was suddenly woken by a rustling in the bushes.  He walked over to the noisy bush that had the nerve to wake him from his peaceful slumber.  He reached inside the bush and was spooked by a soft and gentle sounding meow.  After he regained his composure a skinny black and silver hair cat popped out of the bushes.  Johnny was ecstatic to see a cat, so he did what any eight year-old would do and he attempt to pet it.  The cat was calm and allowed Johnny to pet it.  Upon inspection Johnny notices a collar with a name tag that just said “Sambow”. 
Johnny took the cat home with him that night.  His parents were home that night and were not excited about the idea of keeping the cat.  So while Johnny was sleeping that kicked the cat out of the house and the cat scurried into the night.  Johnny woke up that morning to the absence of Sambow.  Johnny was furious so he skipped school, (which he had never done) to search the whereabouts of Sambow.  He spent all morning calling the cat.  Morning turned into afternoon and soon after afternoon turned to night.  Night was chilly with a full moon and the clearest of skies.  Johnny was about to give up on his search but attempted one last shout.  He screamed as loud as possible the cat’s name.  He was about to return home when he heard a very faint cat cry.  His aching feet dragged along until he came to a tree and observed the cat was caught in the top of the tree.  This wasn’t just any tree, it was one of the tallest in the forest, but Johnny didn’t care.  So he started to climb this mammoth of a tree.  Half way up the clear sky turned to an ominous gray with dark clouds that hid the moon in the night.  But Johnny was dead set on getting this cat.  He climbed on.  Rain stated to pour from the heavens but Johnny climbed on.   Finally he reached the top from being the master climber he was.  Johnny reached for the cat and at the moment he did a lightning bolt hit the tree top. 
Johnny and the cat had disappeared from existence.  No one ever searched for either one.  Its as if they never existed.  But one can go back to that tree and will hear the voice of Johnny calling for his cat, as well as the faint cry of the cat Sambow.

The Price of War


In the jungles of a far off land, the smell of blood filled the skies. John a lonely private was stationed at a medical tent just outside of the battlefield. The enemy, losing the battle, resorted to suicidal tactics. Using improvised fire bombs soldiers began charging into the enemy lines, destroying themselves and others. As John walked around the tents the smell of the burnt bodies made him lightheaded. He sat down and looked up at the skies as the blood red sun rested below the horizon. Hours later John awoke to the gut wrenching sounds of a woman screaming. He immediately jumped up realizing he never checked in at his post. Walking back with his M16 resting against his torso, John began to think about the screaming. He found it odd as he has yet to see a female nurse or officer.
Making it back to his post, his buddy Fredrick, was sitting back smoking a cigar. John greeted him and apologized for being so late. Fredrick turned to him and told him not to worry in a monotone voice. At this point the hair on the back of John’s neck stood up. The air smelled clean and crisp. Also Fredrick, who normally greets him with a joke, seemed unusually calm. John walked up to pat Fredrick on the shoulder and ask him about his day, but the moment he touched him, his body fell over, burned to a crisp. Blood covered the entire tent and when John stared down at his hands a dark red coating covered his fingers.
            Panicking, John ran into the main tent to only find the same situation. Bodies, bloodied and rotting scattered the place. Just then screaming broke through the dead silence that existed before. Coming from outside, John grabbed his assault rifle and stepped out of the tent slowly. Nervous, John began to sweet and his arms began to shake. Slowly making his way towards the screams, he could see a figure in the forests. As he slowly approaching, his legs began to cramp. The pain worsened but John persisted, desiring to see if anyone was left alive. Only a few yards away from the figure John collapsed. Looking down, his legs appeared as mangled sausages. The muscle that was once inside his leg was dangling like a ribbon, waiting to be tied around a present. Unable to hold it in, John let out a blood curdling scream as the figure began to approach John. Getting closer and closer, John could see the reflection of the moon’s light off of what appeared to be the barrel of an M16. Calling out for help the figure rushed closer until it collapsed at which point John could see the blood stained hands of a person who looked like a mirror image of him.
            All of the sudden a bright light appeared in front of John and he woke up realizing it was all just a dream. Relieved John went to stand up, but couldn't.  No matter how much strength he exerted, his legs didn’t want to move. Looking down, dangling tissue of what once were healthy legs were all that existed. Exhausted and weary, John had no more energy to scream but as he scanned his surrounding he saw the flag of the enemy on the wall of what appeared to a cell. Trapped John unable to figure out what happened went to scream but instead passed out, unaware that he was now in a prison used to torture soldiers.  

All Alone

It had just beginning to get dark, the small town Sage lived in was surrounded by corn fields as far as the eye could see. Nothing of interest had ever really happened here, except for the past couple weeks things were beginning to get a little strange. She was walking home from a friends house, hardly aware of anyone else. Usually there were at least some people on the road but for some reason the town was completely empty. Sage had been texting her boyfriend was off at college the whole walk home and had just learned he was coming home this weekend as she looked up from her phone smiling she quickly realized that she in fact was not alone. There was a dark figure up ahead just standing there under a lone street light, waiting. As Sage approached the dark figure she could see it was the owner of the bakery, Mr. Easterbee. She tapped him on the shoulder to ask him what he was doing all alone in the dark and when she did he turned around revealing a horrifically decayed face. His eyes were blood shot and sinister, he began to growl and lunged towards Sage attempting to tear into her flesh.

 Sage screamed at the top of her lungs and raced towards her house to tell her parents what she had encountered. But when Sage got to the steps of her house the screen door was hanging open ripped down the middle and the windows had been shattered. Sage's blood ran cold as she slowly opened her front door and saw her whole family being devoured by the towns people. One of them looked up mid bite with the intestines of her baby sister still dangling from his bloody decayed mouth and with the ferocity of a rabid dog attacked Sage. Sage able to dodge the attack and sprinted to the corn field behind her house but she quickly realized she was the only one in the town who had not become a zombie.

Sunday, October 21, 2012

Halloween Inspired Blog Post

In 300-400 words or more, write a brief story which relies on the rhetoric of fear and the unknown. This story can be a personal experience you've had or one you've imagined. Be as creative with your language as possible. We will share some of these stories next Wednesday in class.

Thursday, October 11, 2012

A Blessing To A Student With No Time


Throughout elementary, middle, and high school, students learned primarily from the teaching of teacher, in class. However, in college, this is no longer true. The professor of the class is not responsible for teaching the information, but rather providing the information via a textbook, notes, etc.,  and pointing the student in a certain direction. The student is responsible for his or her own education, and they must learn the material on their own. Therefore, canceling class does not hinder our learning, but rather provides us with more time to study.
Gone are the days of students not having to study. Students have to study outside of class, because the majority of the content is not even mentioned in class, and the student is still responsible to know it. This differs greatly from high school, where if you missed a class, or the teacher didn’t cover something, you weren’t accountable for it. In college, this is no longer an excuse. Since you are liable to know all the material, it does not matter if you missed class or the professor did not cover it. This translates to the topic of having class on Friday. Regardless of if we decide to, or not to have class on Friday, we are still responsible for the work and material. Therefore, there are no repercussions or consequences if class is canceled on Friday.
Studying in college, unlike high school, is extremely important. Studying, however, takes a lot of time. One of the main reasons that schedules in college seem so open or empty is due to the fact that it is well known that students need gargantuan amounts of time to study the advanced material provided to them. Knowing this, students dedicate huge chunks of time to study and learn outside of the classroom. However, there are still conflicts of time. Canceling class on Friday would provide a large block of time that could be spent on studying and learning, and free up previous conflicts.
Because of unconditional responsibility for the student to know the material and the blessing of having more time to study, canceling class on Friday is in the best interest of student, by allowing them to devote more time to their studies, while not providing him or her with an excuse to disregard the required material.

Wednesday, October 10, 2012

The Defining Moment of My Life


     It seems like every since I was young enough to remember, I have been working hard doing school work. Every day is just another day, another homework, another pain. I need many things to keep me going in my everyday struggle against the plight of public school that an ignorant Englishman forced upon children so long ago. He didn’t foresee the lack of sleep, food, morale, and other things that would occur because of this choice. And this, Ms. Britenburg, is why I need that extra day of comfort.
     This day, if given, will relieve great stress that has built up due to my everyday college life. From things such as homework that has taken longer than expected, to no free time, to making bad grades because of not studying enough, my life has been a mess. A majority of these things cause or are caused by a lack of sleep. One extra day might seem like a small favor to afford a hardworking student like me but I think it will make a great difference. This one day will give me one more day of full rest: from three in the morning to three in the afternoon. This affords me more aware time where I think better and my English paper flows from my mind. It also affords me time to dream of the time when I will be the richest man on earth. And honestly, I just need sleep. 
     When I say that I am not getting enough food, it is most certainly a lie. However, my schedule of when I eat food has been going crazy and I am hungry at odd times. An extra day off will give me one more day to get back into a normal healthy schedule. And not only this but an extra day off will allow me to eat healthier foods and steak. This extra day will give me more protein which will increase my brain mass which will then affect the proficiency of my writing for English. How amazing is that?
     Last but not least I have my family that has been with me through hard times and good times. They are my source for morale and that’s running low due to my current grades in some classes. That one extra day, that extra twelve hours I spend with my family could determine whether I continue to write that hard English paper or drop out of college because I just cant do it. Do you want to be the reason I drop out of college?
     College life is stressful and I have been very busy. I think one more day off will allow me to cool down and sleep peacefully for once. This one day out of all other thousand days I will have could determine the future, so please make the right choice and let us go home!

The Labor Day Connection


            We should not have class on Friday because we had class on Labor Day. Class on Labor Day caused me to miss one of the most important moments in a child’s life: their mother’s 50th birthday. Not only did this cause my mother anguish, but it caused me anguish as well. This anguish came from deciding if I could make it and how it would be feasible as well as what the consequences of missing her birthday would be. If I had the opportunity to show up earlier on Friday than expected, my mother would be ecstatic. Due to your brother’s impending 18th birthday, you can understand the importance of certain birthdays. Could you imagine the feeling of having to miss his birthday because the time it would take to see him would be infeasible for your new college lifestyle? You probably can and it should make you tremendously sad to even think about.
            Not having class on Friday would allow me to get home before nightfall because all of my classes are canceled except for my 8 o’clock. This class will be a wake-up call of sorts and I will leave promptly after it. Upon my early arrival, my mother would be so surprised; it would be akin to seeing her face on her actual birthday. Also, we are celebrating my 18th birthday this weekend. Even though my birthday is not until the 30th of October, I will not have a chance to return home around this date. If I arrived early, my birthday weekend could be kicked off wonderfully with a great surprise to all those in attendance.
            So Ms. Britenburg, class should be canceled in honor of all the birthdays that will be missed during the school year and in honor of those birthdays that have gone by unnoticed.

If momma ain't happy...


          When a mother gives birth to a child, that child is her pride and joy and the apple of her eye.  She devotes her days and nights to the little baby and nourishes him or her until he or she grows into a young adult.  After all of the late nights, screaming fights, and tears and laughter all of sudden it’s time for the little baby to fly the nest, decreasing the connection of the womb that gave him or her life and inadvertently being separated from their loving mother.  Dropping off a child to college is a very proud yet sad day for a mother (my mom was bawling her eyes out in the middle of the street). 
            If any one of your student’s told their mothers that they would be coming home earlier that would make them so happy.  I know my mom is already planning shopping trips and dinner dates with me for the exact moment I get home.  An expression my dad has always vehemently adhered to and ingrained in us kids is “If momma ain’t happy ain’t nobody happy.” A lot of mom’s haven’t seen their kids in a while and are inevitably getting very sad and grumpy because we are just such lovely gems to have around.  When our momma’s aren’t happy then everyone around them suffers, including husbands, their other children, the poor guy at Starbucks on Monday morning, or the overly-friendly co-worker just trying to say hi.  So please, for the sake of all of the people who encounter our mother’s on any given day, cancel class on Friday so that our mother’s will be happy that she will be seeing our splendid faces sooner than expected and the surrounding people will not be greeted with a shrug and a scowl but a shining smile with the thought of the wonderful English teacher who cancelled class on Friday to thank.

pleeeeeaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee

Cancelling class would be beneficial to both the student and the teacher.  This weekend, as we all know is fall break.  It signifies the start of fall.  With fall comes the cooling of weather, intensity of college football picking up, and the changing of the leaves on the trees.  Up in the mountains the leaves have already began to change.  Some people are headed up to these mountains just to see the changing colors.  A lot of families are headed out of town, not only going to the mountains but to everywhere.  They would love to leave Thursday night or Friday morning and not wait until Friday afternoon.  I fall into one of these categories.  I am going home to spend time with my family.  I know that Friday I am going to hang out with a bunch of buddies.  I haven't seen them since summer ended and right before I came here.  I grew up with these boys and they were my best friends all throughout high school.  We did everything together and it was hard to say goodbye to them when I left.  I have never gone more then two or more days without seeing them.  So I cannot wait to see them this weekend and I would like to spend as much time as possible with them.  By being able to leave Friday morning, I would be able to maximize my time with them because who knows the next time I will see them.  When I am home I will also be able to catch up on my sleep.  As a college student, I am always running low on sleep.  Over the past week I am averaging about six hours of sleep per night.  Throughout high school I was getting between eight and nine hours every night.  The longer I am home, the more I can sleep and I want to sleep as much as I can.  Cancel class so I can catch up on my sleep and hang out with my buddies that I haven't seen in a while.

You deserve it Ms. Britenburg.

I know that I have no business arguing for class to be cancelled, but I believe that the amount of work and hours that this class has put in is argument enough. College students work hard every day. Not in just English, but in Mathematics, Geography, Science, etc. They are working on not only your piles of work, but the piles of work assigned by other professors. High school work was nothing compared to what college students have to deal with and I think I can speak for all of us when I say that in the beginning, college was a little overwhelming. Since the beginning of this 2012 school year at Clemson University, these students have been working twice maybe even three times harder (depends on what school they went to) then they did in high school and haven't been able to enjoy a long period of free time. I know that college students have to deal with this load of work and the many hours spent studying and finishing up homework assignments, but I believe that everyone should have a chance to just relax and take a load off. I don't think anyone is as deserving of that as you are, Ms. Erica Britenburg. You not only work hard as our college professor and a mentor that we look to for help, but you also do your own research and work on the side. This amount of responsibility must be difficult to get done and do well. This extra day from class being cancelled would be a perfect time for you to do some extra work that has been nagging at you or maybe even enjoy some quiet time that you haven't experienced lately. I know that you love and look forward to teaching us every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, but I know that even the most hardworking, dedicated teachers need a break from their younger students. You, Ms. Britenburg, are a special case. We, the Sour Patch Kids, have kept you stressed and irritated to the point where you probably want to pull your hair out and I know that you could use a break from our sour, but sweet attitudes. In conclusion, Ms. Erica Britenburg, go spend some extra time with your baby brother (that won't be a baby for much longer) and celebrate the extra day of fall break that you get to enjoy. You deserve it. Seriously, thanks for all you do.

Who needs it more?


Who is more deserving of a day off then the bunch of sour patch kids that we are? You guessed it, the great Ms. Erica Britenburg. Why you ask? I do not believe Fall Break is defined as a break for the students, but a break for the teachers to get away from all the stress and work it takes to deal with the naïve students that we are. Ms. Britenburg puts up with an ample amount of stress and torture everyday by dealing with the negligent, naïve students of Clemson University. Anybody that comes in to class each day with a latte deserves an extra day off for Fall Break. Obviously one day off is not near enough to recover from the stress we force upon the all-knowing Ms. Britenburg, but it will definitely assist in the recovery of the past 8 weeks she’s had to deal with the carelessness of the sour patch kids. This will not only offer a morning of extra sleep, but also an extra day to spend quality, bonding time with her brother for his rise in to adulthood. What better way to spend an extra day off from the stress of naïve 18 year old freshman college kids but to spend it with a naïve 18 year old high school senior. This also opens up an opportunity to have a day to one ’s self, doing anything and everything one desires. So instead of waking up in the morning to come to a class filled with dreadful sour patch kids, Ms. Britenburg can look over at the clock and realize that on this particular day, she will have the power to not deal with such kids and relax without the pressure and stress that comes with her job. So by granting the class and herself the privilege of cancelling class on Friday, many will benefit in many ways but most importantly the glorious Erica Britenburg will benefit the most.

The Long Wait


The effect of extended breaks from the stressful lives experienced by college students can be experienced well before the break even begins. As the days count down students become more and more excited for these well-deserved breaks from the hard work associated with college. The capacity at which students can learn effectively starts to diminish from the atmosphere given off when freedom is right around the corner.
Thus the students, as well as professors, decide not to put effort into the last few days especially the day before break. Many students will just skip class the day before break out of excitement or because they were too anxious to stay. This common occurrence also causes professors to cancel class the day before break because they would rather have everyone there present in both mind and body.
This effect is felt here in Clemson because many of my professors in my Friday classes have canceled class or scheduled an optional activity with no negative impact on the student should they not choose to show. All of this has been brought about by Fall Break, a short 4 day time where there will be no classes whatsoever. Many would say that it is a convenience to start this break early, but as a student I believe that it is a well-deserved gift for everyone involved, the students and teachers. Otherwise, we would all be exhausted from the extreme amount of time spent stressing over college.
This exhaustion will lead to less cautious drivers on the road, which would put more people at risk of getting in accidents on their hurried drive home.  This exhaustion paired with the anxious excitement to get home in a hurry will lead to less cautious drivers which increases the risk of getting into an accident. Accidents have negative consequences such as vehicle damage, injury, or even death, which are all very bad and can be taken care of by leaving school early.